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Visual Ranking Tool: Mystery Elements
Peer Review

Peer Editing

Guidelines for successful editing:
  • Find and share at least two areas in the story that you liked and are written well.
  • Use the Reviewing toolbar if editing is done on the computer in Microsoft Word*.
  • Use highlighter or different colored pens to paper edit.

Editing Points Peer Edit Comments
Ideas and Content:
Story includes characters, setting, clues, and misleading clues.

 
Organization:
Story is easy for the reader to follow, has a clear beginning and ending, and has a logical storyline.

 
Voice:
Story is appealing, full of the unusual and unexpected, and natural to read.

 
Word Choice:
Story has interesting words, strong imagery, and uses the language of mystery.

 
Sentence Fluency:
Story is easy to read aloud, has good phrasing, and varied sentence length.

 
Conventions:
Story has correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar. 


 

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